Saturday, September 20, 2014

The Story

The Original Story:

  • Chair minding his own business while walking
  • Ball comes out of nowhere and hits the chair in the "head"
  • Ball falls to the ground
  • Chair gets angry
  • Looks around to see if anyone is around
  • Kicks ball away, angrily
  • Running to catch up with the ball to kick it again
  • Chair slows down because it is tired
  • Jumps up and down with anger
  • Pauses again to catch his breath
Edited Story:

  • Chair minding his own business while walking
  • Ball comes out of nowhere and hits the chair in the "head"
  • Ball falls to the ground
  • Chair pauses and tries to remain calm
  • Suddenly turns to the ball
  • Ball bounces playfully away
  • Deep sigh from the chair
  • Starts shaking with anger
  • Starts running after ball
  • Catches up to the ball
  • Chair kicks the ball away
  • Turns around and starts to walk away
  • Ball starts following the chair without the chair knowing

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